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The Majestic Hummingbird
by Grace Neuger Age 12
(New Jersey, USA)
Cuts through the Clear blue sky First a tiny blur Then the solid shape Of a hummingbird
Stop and marvel The glistening, shining Feathers Sunlight reflecting off like a jewel
O, majestic hummingbird, So peaceful, yet energetic How are you so beautiful?
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Great Job! by: Anonymous
Great use of imagery.
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lovely by: Anonymous
this is a lovely poem with great word choices and very well written!
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Fantastic poem! by: Melissa
Very well written!!!
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BEAUTIFUL by: Anonymous
This poem is absolutely beautiful! Loved your vocabulary!
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Well done! by: Anonymous
Beautifully written and great vocabulary!
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great by: boss tom
it was a good poem.
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Great by: Anonymous
Your poem gives me chills! Amazing vocabulary and descriptions! I love the question too.
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Our Winter Hummingbirds Tracking Project will track those species that stay year round in southwestern, coastal and southeastern regions of the United States.